First Light — Sample Report

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A real editorial report from our pipeline — four AI specialist editors, one Senior Editor synthesis, a priority fix list, and comp titles. Published with the author's permission.

What's inside every First Light report

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Executive Summary
One-page verdict + strongest and weakest elements
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Voice & Style Analysis
Sentence rhythm, authenticity, and POV consistency
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Structural Integrity
Chapter-by-chapter pacing and tension map
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Technical Assessment
Dialogue, show vs. tell, tense, craft fundamentals
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Market Analysis
Comp titles, genre fit, commercial positioning
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Senior Editor Synthesis
Hartley's final verdict — no hedging, no fluff
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Priority Fix List
CRITICAL / HIGH / MEDIUM — exactly where to start
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1 Free Resubmission
Revise and get a second read included

Sample Report — The Glass Garden

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Published with the author's permission. Author name withheld. Literary Fiction, 82,400 words, April 2026.

What authors say

I didn't expect to agree with everything, but every note landed. It was like having an editor who'd read the book twice.

Lisa M. — Literary Fiction, 94,000 words

The Priority Fix List alone was worth the price. I knew exactly where to start revisions.

James T. — Thriller, 78,500 words

Hartley's synthesis was the most honest feedback I've received after three beta readers. No fluff.

Priya S. — Contemporary Romance, 85,000 words

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